Comments on: Updated: Mount St. Elias — Ski Descents, Red Bull film

By: Lou

Lou — Mon, 22 Feb 2010 16:46:46 +0000

Andrew, it’ll be fine. Don’t reread. As for Haydon shoulder, wasn’t I just saying how far above sea level they quit skiing?

By: Andrew

Andrew — Mon, 22 Feb 2010 16:33:27 +0000

I am not volunteering to be your editor, but I think the Haydon shoulder was greater than 800 vertical feet. Do you want me to point out the rest as well? Because I really don’t want to reread the whole article again.

By: Lou

Lou — Mon, 22 Feb 2010 16:21:52 +0000

I did discover the use of “form” as “from,” perhaps that was the problem.

By: Chris

Chris — Mon, 22 Feb 2010 15:50:04 +0000

I think Lou’s writing and copy editing is in general excellent, especially for a blog. I don’t see any problems with writing in the story above, and this review is important because people may find it and get a clearer idea of the real context for this movie.

By: Andrew

Andrew — Mon, 22 Feb 2010 14:09:53 +0000

I can’t believe you are making the excuse for poor writing because you are paid “a million $$$.” The production value of the film rivals any Michael Moore, Morgan Spurlock, or any other high end budget documentary. As a film goer, and not a ski activist, the film was entertaining and suspenseful, albeit a little long.